nitpicky grammar thing.
Jun. 3rd, 2008 01:02 pmIn my dialect of English, the word shall can only be used in the imperative and in fixed idioms.
- Implementations shall not truncate lines.
- You shall report to Main Barracks at 0800 tomorrow.
- A person who shall remain nameless.
Those are fine, but this is not:
- *Normally, the program shall install itself in /usr/local/bin.
Star. Boldface, blinking, day-glo, 72-point star. If you are predicting future events based on present actions or conditions, and no volitional actor is involved, the grammar in my head absolutely requires will, no exceptions, no mercy. Volitional actors are only okay to the extent that the sentence can be construed as imperative:
- All enlisted men shall obey the chain of command, but must refuse unlawful orders and may object to unwise ones. (military regulations)
- ?Normally, the teenagers shall go for walks as they see fit. (Instructions to house-sitter?)
Of course I wouldn't be grumping about this on LiveJournal if it were a hypothetical. There is a person who consistently uses shall where I would write will in situations like (4) above. In documentation, which I have to read. Because he does this so consistently, I have to consider the possibility of his dialect sanctioning shall for that sort of prediction. Various online sources address the general shall-vs-will question but do not speak to this particular point, that I can find.
Thus, the question, O my readers: Can you name a dialect that allows or requires shall in (4), and if you were editing formal written English, would you substitute will?
no subject
Date: 2008-06-03 05:39 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-03 05:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-03 05:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-03 05:55 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-03 05:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-03 05:55 pm (UTC)So, yeah, I'd consider "will" to be the correct verb there, and "shall" to be an incorrect one.
I would also gripe about the sentence as a whole in documentation, really; "normally" is painfully unspecified for this sort of thing. Instead of leaving the reader to wonder what exactly constitutes an "abnormal" condition, I would write "The program will install itself in /usr/local/bin unless it is directed otherwise by a command-line option, or by...." But that's a separate note.
no subject
Date: 2008-06-03 05:58 pm (UTC)Yes. Exactly. (I'm pretty sure your dialect is the same as mine, though. Where did you grow up?)
That wasn't a direct quote; the person I'm grumping about is quite precise.
no subject
Date: 2008-06-03 06:06 pm (UTC)shall / will
Date: 2008-06-03 07:08 pm (UTC)In the present imperative tense, the shalls and wills were reversed. See Fowler, Modern English Usage.
Conjugation of to will in present tense.
I shall install myself in the chair
you will sit over there.
he/she/it will install itself in /usr/local/bin.
we shall install ourselves in the office.
you will find me in Starbucks.
they will not be with us.
Conjugation of to will in imperative tense.
I will not concede the election.
you shall go directly to jail. You shall not pass go. You shall not collect $200.
The student shall repeat the third grade until his scores improve.
we will never surrender.
you shall capture that hill from the enemy
they shall be very tired of grammar by the time they finish this comment.
Ginny